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I can't place it into words
They wouldn't do any justice
but you,  my closest friend
You just tore me apart.
The glances, remarks they all built up
The glass's filled to negitive
I gave  my heart- and love to you
Just to have the chance to see again
Both ripped and scattered
All over the floor.
You trapped me in a smile
Made me feel all was right
I should have guessed the end
It was so clear, so obvious
I was blinded by nothing
Your eyes looked so lively
It wasn't until now i noticed
There was, is. a vacancy so bleak and black
Your pale skin, once so beautiful
Now greying, almost ash
Finally, I've noticed you're just half dead.
and my eyes are wide open,
once closed.
©2004-2009 ~bite06me
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Awesome... I enjoyed reading this... :)
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Awesome... I enjoyed reading this... :)
:iconjomina:
<glares at the DA admins>>

Why cant i fav more than once?!?!??

GAH!

Loved it Holly, loved it

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:iconbite06me:
Aiyee! thank yous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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like it

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"and my eyes are wide open,
once closed."

Amazing ending. =D
:iconinpayne:
love it... that's all i can say
:iconbite06me:
=) thank yoooous =)

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=) why thank you ver y muchers =) :!:

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