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Solid- Breaking - Broken by ~bite06me:iconbite06me:



I gave every inch of myslf
All love and happiness was for you
I loved you so muich, my eyes were so bright
Every part of me was devotion

We layed in beds, nights were so long
Minds consumed of hearts and lust
Didn't see what was agead
Layed on into bliss.

The pain there was in loving
The thought of never having
Acrted quick to fo the keeping
I gave nysekf to you

In bed we were in love, yes
thee was swaet and noise in the air
Nothing could tear us apart
Nothing except a melting

I forged my name with you
I gave my heart and soul
And all was grand, you loved me to
UNtil, our breaking day

We had just spent a night
Long and together
Nothing ever would have made me think that
This night would be our last

I heard you say,
The worst part was-
Pretending to love you

And it tore me in two.

There was no way to live
I was sent into hell
Everything was a void- so empty
I had no one to go to.

Crawling to the floor
My tears over coming me
Not alble to control myself
This pain is over whelming

My heart's ripped from it's cage
Torn in peices, in the trash
I'm broken rubbage, used and worn
You were the only one for me.

Don't know who I am anymo0re
Lost my identity, and mind
Circles spinning, everything is pain.
Lost my somebody to make me.

Not just dependence, my love- it was true.,
You were my closest thing to a reality
There's no way to explain the pain
it feels to have your soul ripped away

As if in slow motion and stuck on repeate
each second inching by is filled with defeate
It's not better to have loved then lost
It's torture, just watch me.
©2004-2009 ~bite06me
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It happens/we live/ but hurt/ it happens.

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:iconwindburned:
:hug:!

(btw you have several typos)

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GOD DAMN IT!
i DONT CARE ABOT FUCKING TYPOS!

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ABOUT

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:iconredbloodserpents:
ahhhh holly. another amazing poem. so sad. i love you ability to express yourself so well. your words are beautiful.
please keep writting. please keep sharing.
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will do :hug: :smooch: :bow:

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me not care about typos


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fra la la

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:iconjomina:
ahhh god this is so good... juicy.. like a ripe fruit breaking against my teeth and sliding down my throat... quenching that burning thirst that i did not even know existed until its satisfied.....

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This is really good, sooo emotionally draining and sad.... keep up the good work, and who cares about typos??? :hug:

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